From 1438cc271d1f33677aa8f32dee90ec0e1965178e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lobsterpoetry <36234227+lobsterpoetry@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 7 Feb 2018 14:24:16 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update Readme to remove offensive or confusing second
 personal pronoun. Refs #327

I have added the colloquial "I know right?" in speech marks, but in theory this also could be corrected
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 README.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 6d94db2..13d65db 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Start by not writing any code.
 
 ```
 
-This is just an example application, but imagine it doing anything you want. Adding new features is easy too:
+This is just an example application, but imagine it doing anything that is wanted. Adding new features is easy too:
 
 ```
 
@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@ The possibilities are endless.
 
 ### Building the Application
 
-Now that you have not done anything it's time to build your application:
+Now that anything has been done, it's time to build the application:
 
 ```
 
 ```
 
-Yep. That's it. You should see the following output:
+Yep. That's it. The following output should be seen:
 
 ```
 
@@ -34,20 +34,20 @@ Yep. That's it. You should see the following output:
 
 ### Deploying
 
-While you still have not done anything it's time to deploy your application. By running the following command you can deploy your application absolutely nowhere.
+While nothing still has not been done, it's time to deploy the application. By running the following command the application can be deployed absolutely nowhere.
 
 ```
 
 ```
 
-It's that simple. And when it comes time to scale the application, all you have to do is:
+It's that simple. And when it comes time to scale the application, all that has to be done:
 
 ```
 
 ```
 
-I know right?
+"I know right?"
 
 ## Contributing
 
-You don't.
+It cannot be done.