From 374541eebdfd74a633edb8f74364571fb967bc82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Apollo-Apostolos <53583068+Apollo-Apostolos@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 1 Nov 2020 16:07:20 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Improve Language Comprehension These changes help non-English speakers to read along. Changing "but" to "and" suggests a correct continual pathos whilst adding clarity. "But" is used to suggest a hard shift in mindset. It was misused. Changing "them" to "those" clarified that the sentence is about fonts and not about people setting the license. "Them" is used as shorthand for humans. It will confuse the reader. --- non-software.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/non-software.md b/non-software.md index 3c312b8..ccaaa07 100644 --- a/non-software.md +++ b/non-software.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Any open source software license or open license for media (see [above](#data-me ### Fonts -The [SIL Open Font License 1.1](/licenses/ofl-1.1/) keeps fonts open but allows them to be freely used in other works. +The [SIL Open Font License 1.1](/licenses/ofl-1.1/) keeps fonts open and allows those to be freely used in other works. ### Mixed Projects From b15ba984a93f75aebcb299395757cd7d45d6d954 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Waldir Pimenta Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2020 10:45:15 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] more direct way to join the two clauses --- non-software.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/non-software.md b/non-software.md index ccaaa07..757141c 100644 --- a/non-software.md +++ b/non-software.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Any open source software license or open license for media (see [above](#data-me ### Fonts -The [SIL Open Font License 1.1](/licenses/ofl-1.1/) keeps fonts open and allows those to be freely used in other works. +The [SIL Open Font License 1.1](/licenses/ofl-1.1/) keeps fonts open, allowing them to be freely used in other works. ### Mixed Projects